Sentence Architecture

TSI ELAR Study Guide

Sentence Architecture

A sentence must do more than contain correctly spelled words and proper punctuation. Its parts must fit together to express a complete, clear, and grammatically sound idea.

What’s tested: correcting fragments, fixing sentences that improperly join independent clauses, maintaining parallel structure, combining ideas effectively, and choosing the phrasing that correctly completes a sentence.

Complete sentences and fragments

Complete sentence — has a subject, a verb, and a complete thought.
Fragment — an incomplete group of words incorrectly presented as a sentence.
The students studied .

Students is the subject, studied is the verb, and the sentence expresses a complete thought.

Dependent clause fragments

These words turn a complete thought into a dependent clause:

becausealthoughwhenwhileifsince

Complete

The roads were flooded.

Fragment

Because the roads were flooded.

The reader expects more: what happened because of it?

Because the roads were flooded, the buses were delayed.

Phrase fragments

A fragment may also lack a complete subject-and-verb combination.

Fragment

Hoping to finish before sunset.

Who was hoping? What happened?

Complete

Hoping to finish before sunset, the hikers increased their pace.

⚠ Watch out for long fragments

Although the new recreation center, which includes a swimming pool, basketball courts, and several classrooms, attracts hundreds of visitors each week.

Despite its length, this is a fragment. Although creates a dependent clause that is never completed.

Run-on sentences and comma splices

Independent clause — has a subject and verb and can stand alone as a sentence.

Run-on

The storm ended the players returned to the field.

Two independent clauses with nothing joining them.

Comma splice

The storm ended , the players returned to the field.

Joined with only a comma.

Both errors can be corrected four ways:

Period

The storm ended. The players returned to the field.

Semicolon

The storm ended; the players returned to the field.

Comma + coordinating conjunction

The storm ended, so the players returned to the field.

Make one clause dependent

After the storm ended, the players returned to the field.

Coordinating conjunctionsfor, and, nor, but, or, yet, so. A comma followed by one of these can join two independent clauses.

When correcting a run-on

Consider both grammar and meaning. The best revision shows how the ideas relate — the dependent-clause version above makes the time sequence clear.

Parallel structure

Parallel structure — expressing similar ideas using the same grammatical pattern. Especially important in lists and comparisons.

Not parallel

Jordan enjoys hiking, swimming, and to ride his bicycle.

Parallel

Jordan enjoys hiking, swimming, and riding his bicycle.

Hiking and swimming are -ing forms, while to ride is an infinitive.

Not parallel

The internship taught Maya how to communicate professionally, manage her time, and the importance of teamwork.

Parallel

The internship taught Maya how to communicate professionally, how to manage her time, and how to work as part of a team.

Ask yourself

When I see a series of two or more similar ideas, do their structures match?

Combining sentences effectively

Some questions ask you to combine sentences while preserving their meaning.

The museum opened a new exhibit.
The exhibit focuses on local history.
The exhibit includes photographs from the early 1900s.

↓ combined

The museum opened a new exhibit on local history that includes photographs from the early 1900s.

All three ideas, no unnecessary repetition.

Show the correct relationship

Combining isn’t just about making a sentence shorter. The combined sentence should accurately show how the ideas relate.

The temperature dropped below freezing.
The roads became icy.

cause and effect

Because the temperature dropped below freezing, the roads became icy.

The restaurant was crowded.
We found a table immediately.

contrast

Although the restaurant was crowded, we found a table immediately.

Before combining, ask

What relationship exists between these ideas?

Completing sentences correctly

Some questions provide an incomplete sentence and ask which phrase or clause best completes it. Pay attention to the entire sentence, not just the words around the blank.

The correct choice must:

complete the sentence grammaticallyfit logicallyavoid a fragment or run-onkeep the intended meaning
Because the research team collected data for more than ten years, ________.
Because the research team collected data for more than ten years, the researchers were able to identify long-term changes.

The complete sentence has a dependent clause followed by an independent clause.

Test-day habit

Mentally insert each answer choice and read the whole sentence from beginning to end.

TSI strategy: find the sentence’s core

Long sentences look intimidating because of introductory phrases, descriptions, and other extras. Strip the sentence down to its essential structure.

The collection of photographs from several nineteenth-century expeditions, along with journals written by the explorers, provides valuable information about the region.

↓ core

The collection provides information.

Once you see the core, it’s easier to tell whether the sentence is complete and correctly built.

1Find the subject and main verb.
2Determine whether each clause is independent or dependent.
3Check how the clauses are connected.
4Look for matching structures in lists or comparisons.
5Make sure the final sentence communicates the intended relationship.
🔑 Key tip

Don’t rely only on how a sentence sounds. Break it into parts — subject, verb, clauses — and examine how they connect. Once you see the structure, fragments, run-ons, comma splices, and faulty parallelism are much easier to spot.

Sentence Architecture Review Quiz